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I drown and drown in endless sorrow,
Sorrow of which, I cannot name…
Not one nor two I have in mind,
Stories of endless, countless pain…
What to do is the question right now,
The solution to which is nowhere around…
I feel life sucks in a weird way,
Of which and what I cannot say…
This isn’t a poem about a misery,
Nor does it rhyme to the funny tree…
It’s just thoughts penned down,
Cause I want to tread to the magical tree…
I just want to break and feel so free,
Want to go far, far away to the magical tree…
Can I get there is still a question on mind,
So what do I do its a far off sight…
Where is my enchanted wood,
Of the books I have read…
Housing the faraway tree,
With different lands overhead…
Where is my faraway tree,
All crowded with folks so glee…
How do I reach it without a wand in hand…
Treading over softly and treading over land…
Lead me to it, in a magical way,
Help me to keep my sorrows at bay..
Where is my magical faraway tree… π¦
Anish A S said:
Magic on its way!!! Everything’s will be alright π
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RIta Bhattacharya said:
This one is a bit sad….
Bur then… we all wish our Magic Tree…
They do exist…!!!
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Hemanth Kumar said:
magical tree was far far far away from where u started……dont worry just look back n see how far far far far far ur from where u started….now u realise ur soo soooo sooooo near the magical tree….enjoy n have fun neethu…..cheeeersss
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harivain said:
Oh, you need not worry,
And dear Neethu, don’t be sorry,
For when inspiration strikes,
You’ll scream, yikes!
And say with glee,
Hey, that’s my magic tree!!!
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Neethu said:
Wow your amazing..that goes very well..Thank you thank you thank you..π
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honey bee said:
π¦ bit sad.
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honey bee said:
don’t worry neethu! you will be able to see your magical tree soon
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Neethu said:
I wish too ..πthank youuuuuππ
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thatmishmash said:
Oh Neethu , if you find that Magical tree , let me know too . Will join you and we can have some pixie fun , I hope.
Sending you a hug till you find that tree .
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thatmishmash said:
Sweety am not sure how you know what you know but am letting myself hide for a bit. I hope you understand sweetheart.
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Neethu said:
Yesss geeeee…m glad…tc..π
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thatmishmash said:
Strike me name out…pretty pls. Agatha Christie lol.
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noorainsobiya said:
Aaahh!! I know what you mean.. When our childhoods are enriched with the scenes of Enid’s books, it’s really hard to not try finding it our real lives.
A beautiful one my love!!
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Neethu said:
Thank you..glad you relate to it.. πwish wish wish there indeed was sucha tree…
.awesome it would be..π
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noorainsobiya said:
Totally right?? I mean a place to escape & travel faraway to distant lands..
You know what neet?? I’m gonna read some enchanted forest today ππβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Neethu said:
Awesome…πππ
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noorainsobiya said:
^in
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Garfield Hug said:
Oh dear! Why the sadness! Stay on the happy path….the magical tree is there. Have faith and soon you will laugh with me. ππππππβ
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Neethu said:
Cheerssssπ«π¨π¬πΈ
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Garfield Hug said:
Yaay!! πΈπΎπ°π© by the way I love Enid Blyton but I don’t remember that book. I must look for it. πππ
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Neethu said:
Wheeeeee…awesome ..its called the magic faraway tree..a series of books..of different lands overhead. .π
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Sabiscuit said:
Indeed, Neethu, where is my apple? Your poem holds out hope for a bright future.
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Neethu said:
He he he he searching searching for πππ..thank you..π
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andysmerdon said:
very nice Neethu π
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Neethu said:
πthank you
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binucherian said:
Good. I do not know the reason. we all are confused. There are many wonderful examples we read. Many people living in horrible situation. war, illness,….. But they live in peace and calmness, Be happy. at least pretend that you are happy, like me.
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Sandeep Kanabar said:
So beautiful! Reflective!
BTW, Enid Blyton … Wow!! π
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Neethu said:
Geeeee. ..π
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Sandeep Kanabar said:
You do do have the best magic Neethu.. Lose yourself in an Enid Blyton book… There is one called Hop, Skip and Jump – the story of 3 brownies.. I love it..
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Neethu said:
Oh I dint know that..il see if I can find it..thanks ..ππ
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tingleurtastebuds said:
Neethu dear you got talent to write poems is the best part but the sort of sorrow thats more evident from the poem bothers me……. I want you to say don’t drown in your sorrows, just close your eyes you will see the magic tree is just in front of you. When you know that for sure then you will not be drowning anymore…… Want a poem of happiness. Don’t worry darling believe in yourself and love yourself, trust yourself and know always the magic tree is beside you to take to the best world ever.
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Neethu said:
Wowieeee..thank you for the wonderful kind words..its just the ups and downs but seriously I wish wish there was magical treee ..
Imagine what fun that would be..
Thanks again for boosting my morale..lots f love n hugs..πππm really jumping with gleee now πππ
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Freda @ Aromatic essence said:
Such a thoughtful poem, Neethu! Whatever it is, I hope you find that magical tree soon π hugs !
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Neethu said:
Thanks Freda. .its just that some days m down and some days perched on a tree ππ magical or not so…thanks for the wonderful comment ..m jumping with glee right now..π
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Freda @ Aromatic essence said:
xoxoxo
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Fijay said:
Neethu …..there is no faraway tree …ALL places on this earth have pro’s and con’s …the ‘magic’ comes from within and I can see from your blog that have you have it in you ANYWAY π
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Neethu said:
Ha ha ha yes the truth is indeed bitter. .no magic tree …ππ but love your spirit..thanks for stopping by and for the wonderful comment….geeeee m happy now..π
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New Bloggy Cat said:
Ah…so magical! (βΏβ βΏβΰΈΊ)γ))γβ: *γ
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